Quote: But I remembered how it felt to be a thief. It felt like living in a room without any windows. Then it felt like living in a room without any walls.
In Find a Victim (1954) by Ross Macdonald, we hear this thought of the main character, private detective Lew Archer as he is witnessing an interrogation of a thief. He tells us his own experience in two well-crafted sentences of parallel structure.
What makes the Quote quiver?
Neatness and contrast.
The life of a thief, inevitably dangerous and mostly thought of as disordered, gets described in two sentences that are so similar, so simple. Lew packages the complex situation in a plain box and hands it to us. Neat, contrasting the messiness inside.
But the two sentences also contain words which the reader would classify as related: windows and walls. Windows belong on walls, or are holes in walls. But the parallel sentences contrast the two words, even if it is not immediately obvious why. What I’m calling contrast here I should really be calling paradox.
What is at the core of the Quote?
The paradox: a room without windows is an unpleasant, claustrophobic hiding place, whereas a room without walls is no room at all and offers no protection. At first the thief has to hide, then the thief has nowhere to hide.
Isocolon, or in this case the bicolon, is a technical name for the two parallel structures: it felt like … windows, and it felt like … walls.
Alliteration, the repetition of a similar sound or letter in adjacent words, doesn’t figure here in the classical sense. Rather, it’s a cute coincidence (or is it?) that the two words which map onto each other via the isocolon parallelism, windows and walls, both start with the same letter.